correction in essay on the reunion by John Cheever

correction in essay on the reunion by John Cheever

need help in improving the essayI currently received 82% for the paper attached below, need help in getting 90% or abovethe teachers comments say that I need to focus more on the themes related to the story instead of paraphrasing it so muchinstructions and 1st draft of the essay is attached belowlink for the storyhttps://genius.com/John-cheever-reunion-annotatedsome good content on the themes can be found herehttp://sittingbee.com/reunion-john-cheever/